Tuesday, February 8, 2011

Summer Street




















I'm stuck all day in this empty home, 
Where everything makes me feel so alone.
The sun beams through the windows, 
kills the cold, 
Reminding me of something I used to know.
Down the street I can hear the screams,
Children playing in the summer streets.
Reminding me of when I was young,
But hey, I'm still a kid so where's the fun?


It all goes by so uncontrollably fast,
When you make one wish, 

all you want is to take it back.
And it makes you think, if you could change the
littlest things, would you think twice?
Because it'd change your life.

The summer songs are playing in my head,
But springs just begun and the winters dead.
When the school bell rings and I get outside,
Now I don't gotta go home to another fight.
The anticipations swelling in my head,
Tearing every little last thread.
Reminding you of when you were young,
When everything seemed like so much fun.


It all goes by so uncontrollably fast,
When you make one wish, 

all you want is to take it back.
And it makes you think, if you could change the
littlest things, would you think twice?
Because it'd change your life.


Now I take one step out that door.
It reminds me of the things that aren't there anymore.
From the ice cream truck to my old swing set,
Now I've got my guitar and all my friends.
That dead end street is now a fork in the road,
My old tree house somehow seems like home,
If it wasn't now, a crap-dirt rotted hole.
Where all of it went, ya'know, I'll never know.

10 comments:

  1. Love the details here, ice cream trucks and swing sets. Wonderful.

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  2. Love the repetition, the longing for days gone, yet all still here, like the childhood screams down the street. Well done.

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  3. Such a pity it all goes by so uncontrollably fast!

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  4. Mhmmm, well, you're hardly a geezer and fine replacements on on the way for these things.

    I love the scripty font!

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  5. I especially love this line "The sun beams through the windows, kills the cold,
    Reminding me of something I used to know."

    I agree with Fireblossom...there are great things in your future and new experiences ...not only on the horizon but today! It's okay to remember the past but be careful not to long for it too much...live in the present and dream of the future! You have the world at your fingertips!

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  6. I like your writing. Yes it goes by pretty fast, but let all your good and bad experiences of the past shape your future. Even today at over twice your age, things will happen to me (a song, a smell, sun shining through my car window on a drive, lot's of "deja vu" stuff) that brings me back to a certain place and time, even as far back as when I was in my teens. It's all good, just smile and keep it positive and live your life to better the world around you...

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  7. Oh, my....what a magical way with words for one so young! Excellent 'pie!

    ps....fabulous layout! And you play guitar. You're so getting followed now!!

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  8. I would love to hear you sing that and play your guitar. It is really something we all feel at one point or another in our lives. You captured those feelings so well.

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  9. I found your Magpie completely amazing ... I have copied it ~ A must read for my 14 and 17 year old grandchildren. Thank you for being so wise at such a tender age.

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